Monday, November 14, 2011

Analytical Correctness

Well, this week I'm in a bind for time, so I decided to do a quick analytical essay to get it over with. Everyone loves a good analytical essay, right? Talking about themes and symbols just makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. I know a special somebody who also likes to discuss the themes and symbols in The Great Gatsby, and that someone is Jacob Garwin! This one goes out to you buddy, I'll keep our conversation in mind while writing this and make sure to include lots of original ideas.
     As I pointed out in the picture blog, The Great Gatsby is a novel that can be analyzed on many different levels. It contains all of the literary elements; characterization, theme, mood, symbol, conflict, irony, style, suspense, and allusion. I could go on and on about all the elements, but for the sake of brevity, I can't discuss them all. I've already talked about themes and symbols in the picture blog, so to add something new that hasn't been discussed as of now, I'll talk briefly about the conflict and suspense towards the end of the book, and how Fitzgerald chooses to portray those elements
     Apart from using symbols in The Great Gatsby to get across the themes, Fitzgerald uses motifs to help get across the mood of a scene. His use of the symbols and motifs together can demonstrate much more than what the text says outright. For example, midway through the book, Gatsby arranges to be reunited with Daisy. The scene takes place amid the pouring rain. Gatsby comes over wearing a white suit, one of Fitzgerald's symbols in this case demonstrating feigned purity. The reunion proves to be awkward and dreary, and the rain provides a dark and uncomfortable mood to the whole thing. Later on however, they head over to Gatsby's house and rekindle that old flame right as the sun comes out. Poetic.
     Later in the book, the motif of weather arises again to set the mood for a pivotal scene. It is the hottest day of the summer and the tempers are flaring. Tom Buchanan finds out about Gatsby's affair with his wife and confronts them about it. This is when the tension of the book comes to a boil, which is enhanced by the fact that the temperature is literally "boiling."
     So there's that; just a couple more examples of the many tools used by Fitzgerald to provide "Gatsby" with a deeper meaning and make it that much more interesting.

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Picture Blog

     I'm really excited about the rest of the blog posts this year. Right now, I'm going to work on the picture blog and later I plan to do the partner blog, music blog, and literary analysis. These should be incredibly easy, because the symbolism in Gatsby is such a central part of the book, I could write a ten page essay about it (side note, please don't make me write a ten page essay about it). Add the themes to that and this blog basically writes itself. I'm so glad I chose Gatsby because it lends itself to these blog posts so well. That being said, on to the picture blog.



The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald

Jay Gatsby, centerpiece of the story and model of the decay of the American Dream


Nick Carraway, Narrator and everyman thrown into moral dilemmas at a young age.

The Great Gatsby is built around strong themes. They are:
 
 The American Dream (or its decline)


Gatsby has everything, but his reality can never live up to his dreams.
 

The Hollowness of the upper class
 
 
Young Money; vulgar, gaudy.


Established Aristocracy; tasteful, but superficial. Lacks the heart of the new generation of rich.
 
The Great Gatsby also has strong recurring symbols, such as: 
The Green Light symbolizes hopes and dreams. Gatsby clings to it.
 
 The Valley of Ashes signifies the degradation of American morals and society.
 
The Eyes of Dr. Eckleberg symbolize God looking down over the valley of ashes and the degradation that it stands for.

Yellow stands for corruption. Gatsby's car is an example.
 
White stands for purity; some of the characters dress in white to seem pure and hide their immoral nature.

Eggs have special significance.
 
East egg, where the old money families live, represents the false purity of the rich with the inner corruption (yellow) concealed in a white shell.

West egg is where the new money lives. They are more brash and the aura of purity is thinner.
 
I could go on for ages, but this covers the main literary elements that transcend the book. Once you understand these symbols and themes, the book becomes so much more than just a story about rich people. It is definitely one of the great works of American literature, with all its depth and complexity held within such a few pages.








follow and respond

     Time to Follow and Respond again. Here's where I lost the big points last quarter. Length and critique were issues, so I look to fix that this quarter. I think I'm already showing improvement, as I just left quite the lengthy and constructively critical comment on my good friend Abbie's blog. Well, here it is:

     :) Well, hi there Abbie! :) It's your buddy, Brandon! :) I noticed that you got an 89. Or was it a 78? That's right, it was a 98. How could I forget, you mentioned that about eight times. Silly me! :) Anywho, even though you got such a good score, you still fell short of perfect. And you know that 2% wasn't taken off for no reason. There has to be something wrong with your blog, and being such a good buddy, I went through and found some things that you can improve and turn that 98 into a 100! Don't worry, you can thank me later. :)
      Well, to start, the first thing I noticed was the I's not being capitalized. That was something you pointed out in your reflection as well (good lookin' out). In order to get those 2 points back you're gonna have to fix that. What that shows me is that you just went willy nilly and didn't proof-read before you posted. That would seriously help you with any project, not just blogging. Another thing I noticed was your comments. They were quite short, weren't they? And lacking in criticism, too. :( Your new ones seem to have more criticism, though, so I can already see an improvement from last quarter. I noticed that in your new comments, you pointed out that Stevie and Zach didn't receive 95's like you.. Or was it a 97 that you got? Oh right, 98. How do I keep forgetting? Anyway, my point was that you told them what they could do to get as good a grade as you, and that was very nice of you. :) This comes from the heart, because I lost a ton of points because my comments weren't long and critical enough. This one should be plenty of both, so it looks like we're both improving together. And that's just swell.. :) Look at me rambling, I must be finishing soon. Before I go though, I have one more observation to make.
     I noticed that your picture blog was a strict summary of the plot. Mine was like that too, and I lost quite a few points for that. So maybe if you do another picture blog this quarter, you could talk about themes and symbols. If you want an example of a good picture blog, all you have to do is look at mine for this quarter. I think it's pretty snazzy. Not to be precocious, of course.
Well it was a pleasure having this chat with you, Abbie, and I hope you'll leave me a comment to help me fix some of the flaws with my blog too (God knows there are many). Until next time, keep up the good work. I bid you adieu :)

     My next comment was in regards to Angel's vlog:

     Hi Angel, or should I say, "Priest of Pain." I was drawn in by the fancy colors and flashing lights of your vlog. Why you chose to film at an arcade baffles me, but I know it's some subtle form of genius that is beyond my comprehension. Your overall charm is undeniable in this vlog. You have great potential for a good blog here. However, the rest of your blog looks unfinished. The comments section especially looks like you didn't put much work into it. I say this because I see your potential for a good blog based on this vlog. Maybe put a little more time into it and you could have a pretty snappy blog here.

     Finally, I commented on one of my own posts (Is that allowed? If not, I'll do something different). It was in response to a comment left on my picture blog by Jacob Garwin regarding the philosophy behind The Great Gatsby. Here was his comment:

"My dear Brandon.. I fear that you are looking far too in depth into these stories. Why can't a good story just be a good story? Complicating it with hidden messages is just uneccessary. I also believe that none of these pictures above are Brandon Blewett original ideas. If you had read the book with out using the crutch of Google search engine would the above subliminal connections have been made? Doubtful. Not trying to be harsh, I just want to see your develope into your own being. Not a shallow representation of the World Wide Web. This book is not intended to be Inception in book form, it's intended to be a good relaxing read. Something that you truly enjoy. Hope you really take these words of advice to heart. Until next time..."

     Here is my response:

     Jacob, I truly appreciate the advice. Your sentiment is truly felt, and although you came off as a bit arrogant; some might even say.. dense, I forgive you. I know you mean well. Just as Gatsby in the end, means well. But I'm looking too much into this aren't I? On the contrary, I'm afraid I'm not looking too much into it. You say, "This book is not intended to be Inception in book form, it's intended to be a good relaxing read." I agree with you for two reasons. One, because Fitzgerald wrote this book long before the movie Inception was even an idea; and two, because this book is a relaxing, enjoyable read. However, I'm afraid you're missing the point of Gatsby if you don't take the time to look deeper into the themes and symbols that Fitzgerald worked so hard to intricately weave into his masterpiece. While you argue that I have looked too far into this, and you urge me to take the book at face value, I simply cannot. That, sir, would be a crime against literature. While you may choose to bathe in your ignorance and drool as you read a dry story about rich people, I will see a story not to be taken literally, but to be digested for what it truly is. Fitzgerald's intent was not simply to tell a story. He wanted to display the themes and symbols that I talked about. And ignoring this deeper meaning will cause you to waste a truly invigorating reading experience. Take these words to heart, my friend. When you find yourself content with the shallow film of reality that is around you, take to heart the words Leo says in your favorite movie, Inception. "We have to go deeper."